cool

omg it is so good!

That was a nice, calming story, I liked it. Will it be continued?

Not bad!
I liked especially the scene where they met each other for the first time. And I really liked your analogy of their eye color and chili chocolate. Also the ending was cute!
I just don't really understand why the story "needs" Asuma coming home in the winter to remember what had been happening some time ago. It also seems (to me) that he's coming to a foreign house...
Nevertheless, I liked it.
I wouldn't remove it!

Its awesome but i have a question...why was Asuma out in the cold with only jeans a jacken and sneaker?