hi there ^^
i don't know twilight, heck i don't even know if it's a book or a show or movie, but i think it's great, you described that guy's emotions so well and hers as well ^^
please continue soon!

Great start. I can't wait until the next update! =]

AH! My heart literally stopped when I read the last line! Seriously! AH!! UPDATE SOON!

I'll give you a whole batch of virtual brownies!