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Dream of the Night
2009-09-22 . chapter 6
Wow, just wow. Your story is so darn amusing! This idea is absolutely wonderful! The character choices for the Senshi are perfect (and so diverse!) I can't stop laughing! Any chance of Mamo-chan making an appearance? Please update!
Grinnerz
2009-09-12 . chapter 6
I take back what I said about Kaiju Moon, THIS is one of the oddest, most twisted and unusual stories I have ever read. Can't wait for the next part.
Emma Iveli
2009-07-31 . chapter 6
This is one of the weirdest stories I have ever read and I'm someone who's done quite a few "Sailor Senshi crossover stories"... really, really weird.
Dumbledore Is Gay
2009-06-07 . chapter 2
I hoped to see Snape fighting that idiotic female soul more effectively. I know I'd break that transformation pen and die before I became one of THOSE lame-o's.
Nevertheless, interesting, although embarrasing at times (many times)...
Anonymous
2009-06-07 . chapter 1
This is... certainly unconventional. One crossover that never in my wildest dreams did I ever imagine.
Looks promising. Go on...
Computerfreak CK
2009-05-27 . chapter 6
One of the most heart-warming crossover stories in the HP/SM realm!

I hope you keep updating.

That Harry is for one time not the center of attention is a nice change, although I could imagine him getting involved in senshi business either by becoming Tuxedo Kamen (even if I don't think him mature enough or that that relationship would implie Harry/Dumbledore slash) or by becoming Chibi-Usa (big potential to develop the mentor/mother relationship with Dumbledore/Usagi, the teammate bonds with the other senshi, the Marauders, ...)

I think from my rambling it's clear which of the two I would prefere (Chibi-Usa), but first the big Weasley reunion!

Good luck with this story,
Computerfreak CK
DrTempo
2009-02-28 . chapter 6
Clear!(shocks the fic back to life) It's back, baby! I can't wait for more of this fic!
cyiusblack
2009-02-25 . chapter 6
update soon
Innocent Bystander
2008-11-03 . chapter 5
Interesting premise. Still incomplete, I see.

1) The last chapter appear to have an excessive clue... New girls and strange apparition of girls... The other characters have to work seriously to avoid the necessary conclusion (and we have already Minako to be labelled as Sirius). This part can be rewritten to avoid an unwanted conclusion.

2) I would like to see Sailor You-Don't-Have-Say-Her-Name, or what it has to be (a very, very silly idea. Still tempting).

3) More specifically: Rei Hino is a miko, a shinto priestess. She has some spiritual powers and she is the unique of the group, able to cast spells without transformation, using o-fuda, arrows and divination; she has fire-related abilities, also in her normal form.
I would think, if Severus has to be a miko, (s)he has to be a SERIOUS miko.

That is mean: ritual, training, and hakama, the white miko garment. White is the oriental color of purity - and of death, instead of the usual "wizarding" black. Finally, Himiko, an ancient queen of the Yamataikoku (ancient Yayoi period) was rumored to be a witch (more probably a shaman woman).

These arguments can impress Snape, of course, and also other Slytherin's characters, if they would know. Snape's usual serious demeanor can be locked with Rei's miko attitude to give a character very more serious than a scared girl and, in some amusing occasions, suitably terrible. I can also suppose that Dementors can be despised by shintoism like "hungry evil spirits" and the character, in "Rei form", can be very intolerant against Dementors. And fearless, too.

I would have preferred that the intruding Dementors were exorcized by Rei using her rituals, ofuda, and so on... in public. Without need of magical disguise, to avoid the following problems. Well, I understand that consequently Rei would become too popular... (a silent, mysterious, beautiful girl versed in a very powerful ancient oriental magic, able to dispell six dementors - with great efforts, of course but however - well, if she have the combined abilities of Rei and Snape, she has to be really powerful also without "Sailor powers").

Another borderline example of miko, different from Rei, is Kikyo in "Inuyasha". Powerful also in the "dead" version.

4) Ah, and the new students have also to communicate in Japanese... This can be also a secret way to speak. "Rei" can blame "Usagi" for her brainless behavior using quiet, but hard Japanese speak...
Of course, "Usagi/Dumbledore" can be also a case of "obfuscating stupidity", to control Pluto. Well, I hope.

5) We had already "The Chamber of Secret". I don't know about Snape, but Rei can think that a secret room hidden under female's bathroom is "a perverted thing" and that Salazar was "a really perverted", not because of Dark Arts...

Best regards

An Innocent Bystander
Godendag
2008-09-20 . chapter 5
Nice story you have going. I hope you will continue it
Six-string Samurai
2008-08-24 . chapter 5
another good read
DarkRubberNeck
2008-07-28 . chapter 5
Awe I'm disappointed that Harry wasn't a senshi, I mean he is supposed to be very powerful. Maybe he can be chibi-usa? That would be pretty cool hehehe ^_^
cyiusblack
2008-07-02 . chapter 5
update soon
Kellybug
2008-07-01 . chapter 5
Kukuku...!! I don't think Percy really has to worry about mom and dad finding out about his switch to Hotaru :) It fact.. it might be fun to saee theie reactions to Fred and George teasing
Percy about the change - when they find out about it ;)
Kellybug
2008-06-30 . chapter 4
"Minako and reasonale? Don't make me laugh..." LOL!
Rei's and Serevus' personalities are starting to sound alot alike :)) And Hotaru's reacction to Ron? PRICELESS!! Yes..
Ron can be a bit of an idiot, at times...

So!! James and Lily are having a second chancew, hmm? :))
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