so... bittersweet. i loved it. =)

amazing

that was beautifully done. :)

adorable and lovely and sweet
=)

beautiful

Crying, sobbing, loving.
Perfect Sasuke, real Sakura.
A should be canon fic.
Haven't read one of those recenty.
:)

This was beautiful!

I loved this story and your other naruto Sakura/Sasuke stories. You should try writing a longer fanfic.

“Hn,” he added, for good measure, as if that would restore the world he’d just tipped on its axis.


i swear i'm not about to cry. ** great. i wish. i wish it could be like this. bc it has to and they are so perfect after everything. and dear goodness you have every right to do with my soul as you want as long as you keep writing like this. its wonderful.

and these are not tears in my eyes.

You and Yellow Mask are the BEST authors on . I suck and can never make my stories long enough. I thought you should see this vid. It' Broken sasusaku.
/watch?v=rsf5MAKnMdo

oh, this is just gorgeous. really, i love it.

:) great job.

'More meaning not just staring at me from across the road, face closed and quiet, and then turning around so all I saw in my dreams for weeks was your back retreating into the bustle of the village.' Aw, poor Sasuke...

I especially like Sasuke rationalizing to himself about Sakura's hospital hours, then recalling just how much she used to adore him.

“And if I could still make you happy, that would be more than enough reason to live.” Where do you pull these lines? Puddle of goo, right now...

Wow - how have I missed your work before? I actually followed to your profile from Yellow Masks, since her stuff rocks my world too. I read this little piece of work... and just wow! I'm so thoroughly impressed, and crazy surprised I haven't come across you before! I was beginning to despair that I had exhausted all the good SasuSaku stuff out there!

The only concrit I could give is that maybe only living 'for Sakura' so to speak could come off as trite - but really, you weave this complexly enough, where you work in his despair over the entire situation, and his despair at being abandoned and all that... that it works.

Your writing is solid, the description is great, I feel for him (I LOVE Sasuke POVs - good ones are so hard to find!), and yeah, of course I love the subtle romance you work in... and just yeah. Great, great story. ^_^ I'm going to raid all the rest of your SasuSaku fics, and I'll just write right now begging for more in advance, lol.

That was cute
=]

So moving and touching... not to sound all sappy and all. No, seriously this is one of the best Sasuke/Sakura stories I have ever read. I especially love how you put Sasuke and Itachi's
relationship in there; and I love the whole suicide and angst thing.

That was breathtakingly beautiful.