Wow that was awsome
I use to watch Pokemon but i have no idea who they are.
But well done I like it XP!!

Wow. I'm so utterly impressed by this. It was amazing from start to finish. You did a /really/ good job with this.

~YukinoKara

OMG! That was the best story ever! The characters were so much in chracter, and it had an awesome ending! You rock! Please write another good story! Thanks and byes!

... Wow. XD
This has to be the absolute best ShiShi fic I've read so far. O.o XD
Much niceness. 8D

Excellent story~ I have to admit, the ending caught me in surprise. Even with the song lyrics making it all the more obvious (I'm as dense as Satoshi.. xD).

Know what I like? This fic, that's what. Liked the ending, though it makes my teeth rot--but it's kinda pleasant. Thanks so much for writing it!

*Sniffles* You may very well be my hero. That was so amazing. I always thought those two were cute together. Now for a James and Ash pairing. lol (I am kinda weird I guess) But honestly, that was the best fan fiction I've read in a really long time.

if that like happens to me and they tell me what shigeru told satoshi, i will probably get the nearest, hardest thing at my reach and beat him to a millimeter of hif life>..>...and then steal all his money $-$! Mwuhahahahahahahahahaha! GREAT one-shot it was really nice~ and smexshy!!

No. No! You HAVE to continue. I loved this story too much! It SHOULD be multi-chaptered. It was too good NOT to be multi. /pout/ UPDATE PLEASE! Y~Y

~Jayden

It does seem like a good stopping point. I really enjoyed reading this- it was so sexy! And Shigeru's character was right on! I was expecting a mushy love confession, but it felt right and familiar when Shigeru switched gears, and started saying things to hurt Satoshi. Great story.

Great story!

this fanfiction is wonderful! Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful!

T_T

So beautiful... I can't bring myself to say anything more.

Good story. Interesting plot- Shigeru getting Satoshi drunk and, uh, having his way with him I guess. I don't think I've seen that before! I like how intense you make the emotions between these two in your stories. And the ending...what a twist!

I hope updates for your other works are on the way!

Gee, talk about a roller coaster!
I didnt expect it to go that far and that deep into anything...wow. Okay I mean, I really didnt expect gary to say he was 'experimenting' and then come back with that letter.

But I still loved it!...And (I'm pretty sure I said this before...but...) I'm not a big fan of song fics, but this was perfect...

[What is so HARD for you to understand?” The auburn-haired male whispered, “I got you drunk so that you would SLEEP with me.”

Satoshi gazed up at him, shocked. “...Why would you want to do that?!”

“Oh for the love of- Do I REALLY need to explain myself?!”]

I'll be honest. I laughed so much at that line, my mom stared for a second.
^_^