Hmm... Intriguing. I like it.

That...was really depressing, but very close to what happens to so many people.

A great story. Very good.

Wow! That was incredible. One of the best works of fanfiction I've ever read... whoa. I liked it. It tied into the movie nicely and brought some background info about Mouse.
Kudos!

Wow, this is very beautiful, poetic and touching.
Excellent write, well done.
RQ

This...THIS...IS...AWESOME. It's a clever piece of fanfiction, and gives a very logic backstory to the existence of the Agent training-program. How could I possibly resist archieving it among my favourite stories? Keep writng, please, you're awesome=)