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| julie250 2008-07-08 ch 13,  | abuseWELL DONE -another great story,already looking forward to the next one.Julie |
| Elivalero 2008-07-07 ch 13, | abuseWow! This action-packed story had me glued to the screen of my computer from beginning to end. Great work! |
| gaillardia 2008-07-07 ch 13, | abuseI don't know how you do it...but keep on doing it: and...as another one is on the way...I think you've done it! Never, ever, stop writing-you keep me sane in this crazy ol' world Kirsty! |
| aussie angie 2008-07-07 ch 13, | abuseHas always a great story from you nothing but the best reading your stories are just the best until tomorrow night when I read your new story that if I get my internet fix. I should be ok. |
| brook5 2008-07-07 ch 13, | abusesorry to see the story done..its a great way to see starsky in prison and cuffs..lol..cant wait for the next one |
| Jan in VA 2008-07-07 ch 13, | abuseHi Janet! This was a firecracker Janet! It was as if there was no stop action throughout the story! No time to take a breather for the reader (I guess for the writer too huh?! GRIN!) but this was the kind of story for that. You had a timeline going for this one ...and a very short one too, so I think that this worked well. ANOTHER STORY?! You are something else my friend. Start to work at camp today so I'll be looking forward to your new story. Till then... Type to you later! God bless! Jan in VA |
| gaillardia 2008-07-06 ch 12, | abuseI just love how Dobey reacts to "his boys": he tries to be so gruff-but is just a big teddy bear at heart. I would just love to see a story written that focus's on such (hint, hint). As usual-a wonderful story, I feel, is coming to an end. Now get the healed, cleaned and ready to face your wicked pen again!! |
| brook5 2008-07-06 ch 12, | abuseI want to know there ok...cant you please post another chapter |
| aussie angie 2008-07-06 ch 12, | abuseHow much do our boys have to take and poor Captain Dobey can't wait for the next chapter hope it will be soon. |
| Jan in VA 2008-07-06 ch 12, | abuseHi! Is it over...or is it really just beginning? Type to you later! God Bless! Jan in VA |
| keltikswife 2008-07-05 ch 11, | abuseHI I am enjoying your story...Hope to read more soon.. |
| gaillardia 2008-07-05 ch 11, | abuseThis would be a very, very good time for Dobey to make an appearance-I really think they need help now! Oh..and by the way-I brought the apple turnover-where's chapter 12? |
| aussie angie 2008-07-05 ch 11, | abuseI really am enjoying this and I really can't wait for the next chapter to see what happens will captain Dobey will get there in time I guess I will have to wait. |
| xtexan86 2008-07-05 ch 11, | abuse‘Jeez I hate long explanations. You’re beginning to bore me’ Starsky grunted. Love that line! (Recovered from the love scene...now anxiously waiting her fix for more H/C.) |
| brook5 2008-07-05 ch 11, | abusewell they both seem to have just a little bit of trouble here..dobey better hurry and help .now would be good |