Hi

this is simply wow! Very well written. I was totally hooked. Read all the chappies in one go actually.

Keep up the good work.

What?! What was the matter with these people?! They had a magic hand mirror from the ruler of the universe. It told them that Chiriko was nearby… and they… they… How could anybody be that dumb?!

I know a lot of this story is very serious... but that line had me laughing for FOREVER because it's just so true. Thanks!

Ooh, I like this! Amiboshi is one of my favorite characters, so it's nice to see one dedicated to him. I'm not quite sure what I think about all the cutsey affectionate stuff though...on the one hand, I think it's really amusing and I like it. On the other, maybe it's a bit much sometimes? Not sure yet. I do like the different thought processes with him though, for sure, and his relationship with Suboshi.