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Kiwikatipo
2006-05-25
ch 3,
abuseNeither of them knew how she went from flaunting her victory by the pool table to flaunting a hell of a lot more than that in his bed.

And you stopped the story there wiht your excellent characterisation and everything!
acb
2004-07-14
ch 3, anon.
abuse: This post was a long time in the making. Thanks for your patience, and I promise that you'll like the next post a hell of a lot more. This will not being another one of the infamous unfinished PreciousJax stories. Now R&R damn it!

How dare you say that and then leave it the way you left it. EVIL!

Redeem yourself and finish this story!
fichic
2003-03-21
ch 3,
abuseoh getting interesting, please continue
chhlo
Ella
2002-10-26
ch 3, anon.
abuseYou so have to continue this story it is sooooooo good
Ella
2002-10-26
ch 3, anon.
abuseYou so have to continue this story it is sooooooo good
Ella
2002-10-26
ch 3, anon.
abuseYou so have to continue this story it is sooooooo good
Caderyn
2002-09-28
ch 3,
abuseJust gotta say that that was the cliffhanger to end all cliffhangers... i had to review. write more!! but seeing as ur last update was 9 months ago, I kinda doubt that u'd put the next chapter anytime soon.. oh well, pity coz this was going so well tho I think Alec should be less nasty-** and more sarcastic-funny-**...
Rebecca
2002-04-24
ch 3, anon.
abuseWhat a way to end the chapter -- write! write! write! -- and post!!!!
TrueCat
2002-03-12
ch 3,
abuseI really liked this story. i would love to see the next chapter!
Mija
2002-02-19
ch 3,
abuseI have say, you got Alec's personality down. Really good. Hope to see more soon.
aerodynamicallycurvaceous
2002-02-03
ch 3,
abusereally really good.i hate it when u leave a girl hanging, though ;)
Vee017
2002-01-05
ch 3,
abusewrite more please! i csn't wait till chapter IV!
(^,')
Cathy
2001-12-27
ch 3, anon.
abusePlease continue. Pleeeease!! Very interesting, nice set up, good dialogue. I love it. Please continue soon!!
skyeyes7
2001-12-25
ch 1, anon.
abuselove it need more keep writing
jenna
2001-12-20
ch 3, anon.
abusegreat story you've got here. i can't wait to see what happens next!
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