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| Kiwikatipo 2006-05-25 ch 3, | abuseNeither of them knew how she went from flaunting her victory by the pool table to flaunting a hell of a lot more than that in his bed. And you stopped the story there wiht your excellent characterisation and everything! |
| acb 2004-07-14 ch 3, anon. | abuse: This post was a long time in the making. Thanks for your patience, and I promise that you'll like the next post a hell of a lot more. This will not being another one of the infamous unfinished PreciousJax stories. Now R&R damn it! How dare you say that and then leave it the way you left it. EVIL! Redeem yourself and finish this story! |
| fichic 2003-03-21 ch 3, | abuseoh getting interesting, please continue chhlo |
| Ella 2002-10-26 ch 3, anon. | abuseYou so have to continue this story it is sooooooo good |
| Ella 2002-10-26 ch 3, anon. | abuseYou so have to continue this story it is sooooooo good |
| Ella 2002-10-26 ch 3, anon. | abuseYou so have to continue this story it is sooooooo good |
| Caderyn 2002-09-28 ch 3, | abuseJust gotta say that that was the cliffhanger to end all cliffhangers... i had to review. write more!! but seeing as ur last update was 9 months ago, I kinda doubt that u'd put the next chapter anytime soon.. oh well, pity coz this was going so well tho I think Alec should be less nasty-** and more sarcastic-funny-**... |
| Rebecca 2002-04-24 ch 3, anon. | abuseWhat a way to end the chapter -- write! write! write! -- and post!!!! |
| TrueCat 2002-03-12 ch 3, | abuseI really liked this story. i would love to see the next chapter! |
| Mija 2002-02-19 ch 3, | abuseI have say, you got Alec's personality down. Really good. Hope to see more soon. |
| aerodynamicallycurvaceous 2002-02-03 ch 3, | abusereally really good.i hate it when u leave a girl hanging, though ;) |
| Vee017 2002-01-05 ch 3, | abusewrite more please! i csn't wait till chapter IV! (^,') |
| Cathy 2001-12-27 ch 3, anon. | abusePlease continue. Pleeeease!! Very interesting, nice set up, good dialogue. I love it. Please continue soon!! |
| skyeyes7 2001-12-25 ch 1, anon. | abuselove it need more keep writing |
| jenna 2001-12-20 ch 3, anon. | abusegreat story you've got here. i can't wait to see what happens next! |