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HatexLovexo
2009-06-23 . chapter 1
awesome story
i always figured Leo would be one to draw in all his free time
great capture on Leo's true personality
keep writing
hope to read from u again
:)
Water-Soter
2008-12-13 . chapter 1
It's really sad, in a melancholic sort of way. I liked it a lot!
gypsywriter135
2008-10-01 . chapter 1
Perfection! It was pure gold! But one question... Is Leo dead, or does it take place while he's away for training?
bonez1925
2008-09-11 . chapter 1
Nice story, I guess making Leonardo an artist is an unexpected turn, I still liked it though. But could you do one with Mikey, Please!
SavirtriXLeo
2008-09-06 . chapter 1
I L-O-V-E-D it. It's about time Leo was shown for doing something more than ninjitsu. I hope you can write some stories about the rooms of the other turtles. Likke I said, loved it.
Petrea Izefia Matkeoo
2008-09-06 . chapter 1
That was awesome. I liked it. Good job. I can really picture this as being Leo's room- it fits his personality well.
lorientmnt
2008-07-17 . chapter 1
Another amazing story. I actually read "Waiting Rooms" first, and this one is just as good. I'm curious though, if you were implying that Leo was dead or missing, or only gone for a while. It sounded more like the former... Is it supposed to have taken place during Absence, or is a completely stand-alone fic? Sorry, I'm rambling now. I loved it and even without knowing all the answers it is a wonderful read.
calliopechild
2008-07-11 . chapter 1
That was a very neat little piece, poignant and heartstring-tugging. I really like the idea of Leo as an artist, and his last mentioned drawing sounds really neat.

One thing I wanted to ask, though...is Leo dead? Or just, gone, like when he went to Japan? I'm kind of getting some death vibes at the end, and they make me sad. I was just curious about that...
ImpossiblyBeautiful
2008-06-29 . chapter 1
This was really good. I liked it a lot.
i was a bit confused as to why Raph went into Leo's room in the first place though??

i like your writing style it really works for your stories(which i also like)

x
Patterson1219
2008-06-28 . chapter 1
Awesome one-shot... Terribly curious about what exactly happened with Leo. Loved the idea of Raph poking through Leo's room in hopes of understanding him better... And the drawings? Absolutely perfect... thanks so much for writing this wonderful fic! :)
54Viruses
2008-06-27 . chapter 1
Excellent job! I recently tried something simular to this but if fell incredibly flat, yours was just incredible! Thank you for posting!
Kyaserin Marii
2008-06-27 . chapter 1
Wonderful one-shot. Loved it! It leaves a lot to the imagination (is Leo dead or just gone on a journey)
Danaa
2008-06-27 . chapter 1
Ahh, yes, the Leo-draws-and-one-of-his-brothers-finds-out concept. Loved it the first time around and still hasn't gotten old.

Love your story. ^_^

Just, where is Leo? Is he there or on that world trip?

(I knew it, I knew it. I know I should have put you on "Autor Alert" but no, for some stupid reason I didn't. Well, might as well do it now.)

Keep up the great work. ^_^
SilverSmile
2008-06-26 . chapter 1
Aww... that was really bittersweet!

I'm so happy you wrote this and shared it on here. It's such a sweet story... I wonder, would you ever consider doing such a story but the other way around, with Leo searching in Raph's room for something?

As usual, your writing is top standard!!

Can't wait for the next up-date to your other story!

Smile
Deana
2008-06-26 . chapter 1
Well done! Is this supposed to take place while Leo was gone in the new movie, or is this supposed to be after he died or something?
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