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LebenVamptasticly.LiebeCassie
2009-08-22 . chapter 8
heehee being the awful person i am, when i saw the warning i was like OMG YAY! lol
ah! wonderful story dearie! <3
jongley12
2009-08-17 . chapter 14
well, you said you wanted reviews, so here you go. this story's great! the end seemed to move a little fast, but it didnt take anything away from the overall appeal. also, it may have made it a bit easier to read if you had said whose pov it was each time the pov changed. not including that didnt really matter because i could almost always figure out whose pov it was after reading the first few lines, but if you write a sequel, (which i hope you do), it would be something to consider adding. (i hope i dont sound like an overly critical person, i mean this all in friendly way.) i loved the way you kept the story from being too un-realistic by having 3 of the devilish members date th boys, and then having georg date sasha's cousin. obviously it was still pretty un-realistic anyways (though every th fangirls dream), but i still think it was a brilliant idea. so, about the sequel. its not like im gonna jump if you dont write one, but i would enjoy it if you did write a sequel. itll be interesting to see what happens to the kids... =) so, yea. great story, i really enjoyed reading it. tokio hotel rox. my fav is gustav (im a chick drummer), how bout you? personally, i love all the guys, but gustav is my fav. =)
thluvr
2009-04-02 . chapter 14
so cool! Peace, Love, Tokio Hotel!
RaiRai13
2009-02-07 . chapter 14
AW W W W W W W W W W W W W ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! THAT WAS ADORABLE! ! ! ! ! !

It was SO nice that Tom found someone who changed him, and that Bill found the girl he's been searching for. They all deserve them...too bad it isn't real! 'Cause if it was THAT WOULD BE AWSOME! ! ! ! !

CUDDOS TO UR STORY!
kaitlin08
2008-11-30 . chapter 14
This was a great story!! I loved every chapter! I cant wait to read your sequel, your stories are wonderful! :)
phoenix907
2008-11-23 . chapter 14
OMG!!
This story was so good! I mean at times you had me crying. Other times, i laughed, and sometimes i got so darn mad at you for doing something, than forgave you later. dont stop writing! that would be the - ugh i dont want to think about it.

now 'bout your comments:
1) Yes Bill looks amazing, but more so Tom. ^_^
2) He's also an awesome guitar player, i agree with you there
3) i didnt know that Georg played guitar i thought it was only base, and yes he really is built!
4) Gustav does have dreamy eyes...*_*

Now those bad things...
1) Yeah Bill does where a lot of make-up but he still looks real hot! Have you seen him w/o?
2) HIS DREADS ARE AWESOME! Though now that i think about it, it would be hard to clean them...STILL LUV HIM!
3) i agree w/ u about Georg.
4) i happen to like quiet boys. there not as annoying, and they usually have something insightful to say
jess caldwell
2008-11-16 . chapter 13
this story was awsome had lots of emotions
i cryed when he asked her to marry him it was sweet
congrats and keep writing
Audie Lea
2008-10-21 . chapter 3
AW! Can't wait to finish reading the rest of the story!
Audie Lea
2008-10-19 . chapter 1
I think this chapter is really good. Can't wait to read the rest!
vipergymnast67
2008-09-21 . chapter 2
how does this story only have 15 reviews?!
i only just read the first chpter but this story looks really good
=)
TextBooksAreEVIL
2008-09-14 . chapter 9
pansy was during the revenge era. Then it disappeared, and no one knows what happened to it. I heard a rumor that Frank smashed it against a stop sign. Tehe!
TextBooksAreEVIL
2008-09-13 . chapter 10
I think that Frank Iero had the sexiest guitar. Pansy is so awsome! (that's the guitar, in case you don't know who My Chemical Romance is.)
Tom's Luva (BREANN)
2008-08-24 . chapter 1
BECCA U Rok!! that is identical to me! I love reading it!TOM IS HOT!!
not-into-cliches
2008-08-19 . chapter 14
i tried reading this about a week ago, but i wasnt too into it.
so i tried again and i think i'm inlove. this was amazing.
i'm glad you didnt got into too many pregnancy details, that always gets me creeped out when people do that.
but telling who was talking was confusing but i liked how it changed.
great job.
sequel? or no?
Stepahnie! (George!)
2008-08-18 . chapter 14
FOD!lol just so u kno its me! ahaha i love it so oso so much! ahaha! u so got me right! love yas!
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