LOVE IT!

i love this story and i absolutly hate the father what a butt. anyway great story up-date soon

This is lovely! It's well written, and I like Betsy's character. I think you've really kept Tony and Gibbs in character, too. Nice job and I look forward to reading more.

This is a well done, plausible slash story - you have the characters in character, the OCs are realistic with great reactions, and the story flows well and a joy to read. I'm looking forward to more when you write it.

Thanks - this is in the list of well done slash I admire per my profile!

loved it more please

it's so sweet! i love it!
i have a lot of things to said but i don't know how to write them in english... XD

very happy to see another chapter up, great! love the pretty woman, quote, can soo see tony doing that!

Looking forward to reading more please update soon.

what a way to leave the story so not nice. Please update soon.

OH I like this story.

Alright... good to see you back:-)!
Fantastic chapter, it has my interest repiqued.

I love this story. Keep going. I also like the way you tied an ex-wife into the story. Post ASAP.

I can't wait for more. Loved the Julia Roberts quote...lol...Tony and Betsy seem to be doing good. And I'm glad that Jethro's ex is willing to help. I still can't wait for Tony to tell Gibbs about the wife and then Betsey about the locket. But I also want to see the underhanded plan that Annie has..and how Jethro reacts...great can't wait for more. sue

Just found your story .You have a pretty good one going!Loved the Pretty Woman quote!

I felt so bad for Betsy but she has Jethro and Tony now. And I wonder when Tony's going to tell Gibbs about the mother and give the locket to the girl...This is written so well, I love the story...great job, Sue