please update soon :D

your story is heartbreaking ! i cried several times because of poor roxy :'( I'm curious to know what happens next please update :)

Lynx :D

wow this story is really good. But I can see the last time you updated this was so long ago. I have a feeling you have no thoughts on putting a new chapter up any time soon. I'm so sad.:B

Dude, this story is so... awesome. xD At first, I was sad ("Axel! Nu! WHY?") because of the whole angsty relationship with Axel and Roxas, but now it's getting to be really cute. xD

;-; Axel is such an ass in the beginning. Gah. I know you haven't updated in awhile but hopefully you will soon, I'm curious as to what'll happen when he remembers everything.

Soo magical subscribe button is pressed woo! :D

I really love this story, it's so sad what happened to their relationship. D: It reminds me of the song 'Just Be Friends' by Megurine Luka, there's an English translation of the video on YouTube and I think it would help you write.

Pretty good spelling and punctuation, sometimes problems with grammar such as past and present tense but nothing too drastic.

Please update soon! :D

oh, im liking this so far! i like the book zexion had. quick reflexes save lifes. LOL

wonderful story so far. I hope you update soon. I can't wait to read more.

I really like this- although I hate the bit with Axel cheating on Roxas with Larxene. Can't wait to read more!

I love it I love it I love it! please please please keep writing! XD you are a fantastic writer.

Aww Axel is trying so hard.. i like this axel more than the cheating one. i kinda want him to earn back his memory but at the same time...i kinda don't...cause he was horrible to Roxas.

hm maybe a 10..idk i didnt learn functions haha..they always confused me.. is infiniti a possible answer?

okay maybe Demyx dad is hm...idk haha. i wont even try and guess...I thinkies that Roxas is falling in love with the new Axel just a little bit..

Soo sad.. Roxas tried to commit suicide when after he was raped...i wouldnt trust anyone after that.. did Seifer go to jail!

Dem isnt bad. haha he's funny. Axel is just like a child.. hopefully Axel and Roxas can rekindle their relationship.

Omg seriously i want to know.. if Axel loved Roxas so much why did he cheat on him? Axel is a butt-face...for now.