Nicely done one-shot :) A few spelling errors, like using "than" instead of "then," but aside from that I found it to be a good read. I'd imagine Deidara committing suicide in a more flashy manner, though; like a suicide bomber or, jumping from a building-theatrical and instant, unlike a hanging or slitting of the wrists. Or for the matter of instant, perhaps a bullet in the brain.

It was wellfully descripted and included one of my favorite songs; I applaud you :) Don't normally read yaoi. . . . Kinda wondering why I didn't catch that it was yaoi before I read XD Anyway, my only advice would be to watch the format, grammar here and there, and spelling.

Valedictions,
Aki

Hi!
Aww, your fanfic made me cry T_T It was so beautiful! I love SasoDei, and...and... wa T_T
Please, make another chapter, please T-T
And also I love that song
Hope that you'll write more of this great fic!
Bye!

*cries*
I think it was a bad idea to listen to Cellar Door and read this at the same time *sniffles*
Even though it was short, it's well written.

TT.W *sobb* God I loved it! It was so sad but*sobb* I loved it.

Hey, Rikku, can't wait to write with you! Like your style, too. Very tragic.

I best get working on the story so you can proof it. Bye!

Love
-Sasori's Ventriloquist

OMFG? Deidara died?

WHY DOES DEIDARA ALWAYS DIE? -sobs-

Akatsuki: The Mob. Wicked awesome. I want mores