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Reviews for: All's Fair in Love and War
JunkoAmaya
2009-04-09 . chapter 3
okay like the story not so much the language used. i understand the english but not really the japanese.
jojoma-kitsune
2008-12-19 . chapter 3
are you gonna make it one of those she has a sealed being inside of her stronger than kyuubi stories ?
rikarudo
2008-12-19 . chapter 3
the story is interesting... but making your OC that powerful while being a chunin? no making sense and please I'm beging you to not make Naruto that weak... the other authors make him an academy student when he's supposed to be jounin. Anyway interested at how poor Hinata is going to get out of this one... keep it up.
WolfLord04
2008-07-16 . chapter 2
ugg the whole point of the caged bird seal is to keep the secrets of the kekki genkai of the Hyuggas secret plus I don't think Hiashi would be that keen on arranging a marriage between the village that made him sacrifice his brother.
jojoma-kitsune
2008-07-16 . chapter 2
this is fun haaha
yay
paranoidbychoice
2008-07-16 . chapter 2
haha this is so good naruto is **
paranoidbychoice
2008-07-05 . chapter 1
woah so if hinata doesnt marry this guy war is going to break out and thousands of people are going to die talk about pressure update
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