 Jessie-Heart Breaks Happen 2009-03-27 . chapter 10OMC THEY HAD SEX! wot yaay and they r back together! that was very FUN chapt !
wuv Jessie |
 RandomCUZISIDSOluver 2009-02-16 . chapter 10O.o MORE!MORE!MORE! *squeals*This is an amazing story! Too good for words! |
 MaroonSweater 2009-01-11 . chapter 10omg
it's getting hot in here!
lol sorry. interesting chapter. sorry it took me so long to review. i was slacking off and ignoring my fanfic emails :O |
 oxcrushhed 2008-11-25 . chapter 2Noo Edward is gonee :'(
(falls off chair) |
 TheGodsCanDance 2008-09-20 . chapter 10That was fun! The idea of Rose and Bella bonding over dresses worn to the Grammys and Bella having been voted one of the Best Bodies on E! and Jasper distractedly trying to brush the girls off with an "Oh, you look good in everything" whilst playing video games! The last one was SUCH a boy thing ~ very funny!
I like assertive Bella. She has earnt the right to state what she wants and go after it. She has been through a lot.
Well done Ani! Looking VERY forward to your next update.
x |
 TheGodsCanDance 2008-09-20 . chapter 9Sweetness and light :=) |
 TheGodsCanDance 2008-09-20 . chapter 8Hm.
Only kidding! You got a full chapter of fluffy pink goodness. Well done. |
 TheGodsCanDance 2008-09-20 . chapter 7Gah! He's ba-ack! |
 TheGodsCanDance 2008-09-20 . chapter 6Aw. . .
BTW, youtubed both your song choices (interesting segue!) and then wandered off into the world of Twilight postings on there. This obsession is desperately sad.
I just want Edward back in Bella's life now. I know I was mad a little while ago, I still am but Bella without Edward is like Vegemite without toast ~ one just sits there being miserable in the fridge and the other just veges out on the bench. They are complete only in unison. Having said that, if the Vegemite forgives the toast without having her say and making him suffer, well, I will continue in my quest to throw things! |
 TheGodsCanDance 2008-09-20 . chapter 5This meeting betwen A & B was always going to be awkward. At least the 'truth' is out now. Still angry at Edward though. That boy runs like nobody's business. Somebody should go and throw things AT HIM! Gr. Bloody Edward. |
 TheGodsCanDance 2008-09-20 . chapter 4*~*~* Shaking mah groove thang all round the lounge room *~*~*
And a cliffie! Whoo hoo! All is forgiven from chapter 2 :)
Anyone who gets me dancing like that, well, how can I possibly stay in a funk!?! |
 TheGodsCanDance 2008-09-20 . chapter 3Sigh. That hurt.
It was beautiful, the lyrics to the song were lovely, Bella has survived after a kind. . . but . . .
Bella lost Jacob. Edward and the Cullens simply did not come back. Charlie and Renee lost Bella.
I like your cast of supporting characters. You write them in very well. And again, your choice of music fits the writing so well. And Bella's power ~ perfect again. For the girl who could not lie without her face and voice giving everything away, she can now see the truth in others.
Well done Ani! |
 TheGodsCanDance 2008-09-20 . chapter 2GAH! Do I write this review or do I catch the next plane out of here to Boston and come around and throw things at you?!?!?! URGH! ! ! !
What can I say? I guess things will get better. I mean, they must. But why? Why didn't Alice say something?! Why didn't Bella? She would NEVER cheat on Edward (I mean, lets leave the whole werewolf factor out of this of course ~ that's different). DANG! I am going to read chapter 3 but am doing so in a temper tantrum, I just want that on the record.
SHE IS LEARNING PIANO FOR HIM! Bloody Danny. Knew he was no good! |
 TheGodsCanDance 2008-09-20 . chapter 1What a perfect start! I love Muse and was happily impressed with your music choices Bella carries in her handbag :)
Danny though? Hm. . . not overly sure about him yet. Luckily, I have a whole slew of chapters to get stuck into so I will get my answers to my hunches sooner rather than waiting.
Loving the whole IC bit. I've been reading so much OOC and AU stuff that it is such a relief to dive back into the world of Canon SM.
Catchya after chappie 2!
x |
 FrequentlyDazzled917 2008-09-17 . chapter 10aww! i really liked it!
are you writing more or is this the end?! |