Nice chapter I take it its all leading towards a major smackdown soon? quick question about mack 2.0 is it compatible with ranger tech? and is the white rhino spirit Dom? and also is remius able to sense animal spirits within any human if they have them if so I think he would have a field day with the originals espcially Tommy

Hi!

Okay, so I've read this before, but only now got around to drop a review. Not to mention the site wouldn't let me do it before too.

Anyway, to the point of interest. It's a very interesting story, at least from what I can see from the prologue. Very well-written and I'm betting there will be some serious character development ahead.

Your usage of the English language deserves recognition, unlike the English used in several other PR stories I've read - those seem like they were written by pre-schoolers. Yours, however, is extremely well written and each scene leads to the next, following some sort of rhythm that eventually leads into the climax of the chapter. It's exciting to read.

If I can be quite honest, it was very strange to read the story at first. I was so used to the fluff stories and the strangely written ones that it was a surprise to read A World's Feal Revolution. But it was a nice surprise, a very good one. This is now one of my favourite PR stories.

I particularly liked Jarrod's, Lily's and Theo's tests, it was very creative of you to have them battling against themselves. Casey, however, is getting to my nerves. He's being annoying and too darn curious to his own good. And, of course, he just had to make a mess out of things.

All things considered, it's a very good story. Almost like a book that you can't stop reading until you get to the end of and even then you keep hoping it won't end so soon, because you like it too much to put it away.

I'll keep reading now and stop babbling.

Cheers,

~Mellie~

I just fell in love with this story right after the first chapter. This is one of the best AU Jungle Fury I have read yet, with the lenght and details you place into each one of the characters. I love how they get their suits, that Fran and RJ co-own JKP. I totally love how you did RJ in this actually, the details you place into him just brings him out more. Same with Fran. But the best part I have to love is Casey being the host of Dai Shi and Jarrod gets to be the leader of the Power Rangers! Awesome. Added bonus with adding the Wind Ninjas, Mystic Rangers and OO to the mix. I couldn't help but giggle at Dustin calling Jarrod is loin bro, makes sense. Got a little confused as you used different names with Advisors/Overloads there, but it was cool.

Keep up the awesome work, ya here!

I'm so glad to see the next installment up!I really love this story. (And this review would have been up several days ago if my home computer was working . . )

I continue to be fascinated with what you're doing with the animal spirits. To have them as separate entities, unlike and potentially even hostile to their hosts, really puts a new spin on the story. I do feel sorry for RJ - his animal spirit is obviously a heavy burden.

Master Swoop's song was great. I like seeing the history of the temple come into play. I'm guessing the Wolf Spirit's capture and what sounds like torture at Dai Shi's hands is why RJ has no Animal Armor to call on, and also why the Wolf Master seems to live in semi-perpetual estrangement from the Pai Zhuq.

But the Wolf Spirit isn't responsible for all of RJ estrangement with the people around him. Master Phant in particular seems to dislike RJ as much or more than he dislikes the Wolf Spirit, and RJ, not the spirit, is the one who shoved Fran away, so I'm curious as to why RJ keeps distancing himself from everyone. I know you'll get to it :-) - it's just that I find the waiting hard.

I als love Casey's spirited defense of himself. He's proving a much harder nut to crack than any of them thought. I'm hoping he'll turn the table on his captors in some brilliant move before the story's done. (I did think that Jarrod fell into evil awfully easily in the show.)

Finally, Mack's cameo was great. He was always an underused character (at least in my opinion) and I enjoyed watching him shine.

Great story!!

Great story so far and the guy that got chased by a bull by wearing his uniform that seems to love excitment wouldn't happen to be an ex android would it?

This is absolutely fantastic! I like the darker twist you've added, especially when it comes to the masters. And the sequences with Casey are really intriguing - it's hard to tell where you're going with those, although it's fun to speculate.

The Mystic Force rangers are a great touch, and I know I should recognize the pair in the restaurant too.

You've really got the characters nailed, and you're developing the story beautifully. It's going to be hard waiting for the next installment.

So incredible! Great job! Can't wait for more!

I've been following your work for a while now and I'd just like to say that I really enjoy the way you're exploring the dynamics between RJ, Master Swoop, and Master Finn. I didn't really take to Finn in the episodes and felt that he was grandstanding for Theo, Lily, and Casey's benefit when he showered praise on RJ. The resentment RJ feels for his father in your pieces is a better fit for the situation. It will be very interesting to see what you do next.

Awesome story! Can't wait to see what happens next!

ooh this was great!! I love your Jarrod which shouldn't surprise me but it does. If Disney had any sense, they don;t i know, this Jarrod at least would probably be one of the PR favorites.

I like how its not about them being PR's its them fighting and how RJ is not really as RJ in this, he is more serious. Theo and Lily are motly the same which is good cause it highlights the differences with Jarrod.

I love how close Jarrod and RJ how and the father son, kid comments make me smile. I love the cat, so cute with Jarrod and RJ's litle spiel on him being good with dogs...hehe...

So is Casey Dai shii? I want to say yes which would mean that Casey and Camille (Carmen, right?) know more then the rangers think.

That and when Jarrod got his powers did he use the gauntlets or was that just his personal power? It wasn't clear to me as I read.

Great as always, Fran^_^ can't wait for more.

awsome i cant wait for the next chapter hurry and update

kep going this is a very good story very good plot.