i loves it!

Very nice, I found that your story was extremely descriptive, which is a hard thing to master, please make a sequel.

wow... powerful to say the least. well done.

:-)

did he just cut out Youko's eyes... *grabs the chainsaw* GOOD BYE YOMI! *slice*

nicely written *wiping the blood off my hands* but yomi did diserve his fate. He betrayed Youko's orders over and over again, and killed many of thier men that way. And Youko kept saving him, until he knw there was no chance of his changing. and any way, Yomi only grew strong because of Youko, he shood have thanked him. Which he actually did in the end. It was better that way.