Aw! This is so cute! I love the twist at the end, I so was not expecting that!

Want to check out my fanfiction at -joe24.?

Wow, I love it! Totally amazing. You're such a great author!

Sandy

yay, it was like two stories and two Happy endings in one!_

I liked your story a lot and I found it both realistic and emotianal, but not sentimental though (which is a good thing). However I kind off think Hermiones feelings disturbed the plot in some way, but that's just me I suppose:P Anyway; well done:D