this is a very strange story, your elrond is absoluty not like mine !
please, be fast to post, i am eager to know what will happen next !

I like this chapter the most and can't wait to hear more. But I got a feeling that I am going to like the next chapter even more. I hope that Thranduil will win the contest. Just don't let Legolas die before the contest is over. I think Elrond is realy going to regret what he said about Legolas. I also got the feeling that Aragorn is not going to be very happy when he hears what his ada said about his best friend if he wakes up. Hey, maybe if Elrond came back to his senses then he can heal Legolas. But this is your story so you may whrite it how you like. I just need to tell you I absolutely love this. Please update.

i hope thranduil do find some answers to what really happen,elrond is being stubborn and legolas is dieing i hope he doesn't die

It's distressing that Elrond is being so cruel.

I'm looking forward to the next update.

~Aniu

Sorry, forgot to alert! :)
Also i was reading some other comments and i have to say that 'raven' is way out of line when he/she says you have 'a small pea for a brain' Although she/he has every right to his/her own opinion i dont think there is any reason for her/him to begin to insult you.
But i, for one, like your story. :)

Wow ... Elrond is being such a jerk!
I can't wait for the next update! I really want to know what happened with Aragorn and Legolas! :) Hope Thranduil wins!
:D

Another great chapter. I sincerely hope that Legolas finds help soon. And Elrond is blinded by the anger and fear that consumes him over Aragorn's poor state of health. He'd better come to his senses soon, else he'll end up losing all three of his sons.

Update soon!

Still good! thanks for updating, and please do not abandon this story.

Thank you for the chapter!

(Turns to Legolas, comforting smile upon face, runs forward hugs blond haired elfie, cheeks him over for injury) Honey, you are no murderer, unless u mean orcs, u didnt kill Aragorn, if any one does it will be Elrond, u didnt kill no-one, (Turns to Elrond, with a scowl that could kill even sauron, upon face) You bastard, you lying, manipulating evil bastard (hmm can i say that on here, well too bad) what the hell do u think u are doing, u are so hypocratical, u worry about Estel now but wasnt it u who caused him so much pain, so much hurt when all he wanted was Arwen, wasnt it u who forced them apart, and now when someone makes one mistake, just one mistake, u go all evil on him, and banish him for being a murderer, well let me tell u right now, if u dont stop this f'n nonscence LORD elrond, then i will just have to get my hands dirty, and covered in half-elven blood, and i will make it clear, the blood is not Elrohir's, Elladan's, or Arwen's no it is urs, i will just have to join the ranks of murderer, which consist of u, and possibly, if i dont beat him to it, Thranduil, i am quite happy to join those ranks if it means taking u off of the face of Middle Earth, u may be a healer, but no healer can bring themselves back from the dead, and if they can well i will just have to shoot u down again, because here in this world we have things called guns (i dont actually have one, but i no someone who might) just try me mister, i swear it will be the last challenge u are ever foolish enough to make, (Turns to Thranduil, after cheeking that she is not covered in half-elven blood, runs to him, grabs him around the neck and clings to him, whispering comforting words, as tears streak down both faces) come on Aran i am ruting for u, u must win, Legolas depends on u, dont worry bout Elrond, he is as good as dead, litterally, but scariously (i did mean scariously, not seriously) i need u to win, please, (turns to the twins) sorry guys, i havent done anything wrong yet, but just in advance for killing ur father, yes i am sorry (not) but still, (turns to Sivan, breathes deeply) now that my ranting is over, i must say good story, thanking u so much for helping me vent my anger, Elrond does deserve it, and i am so sorry for using inapropriate language, (Smiles innocently) but duty called, and i answered, Legolas must get beta, because if he doesnt, well i wont be able to be Thranduils.Heart.And.Soul. anymore because all three would be dead (Thranduil, his heart, and his soul) and i wish to remain Thranduils.Heart.And.Soul. not to mention the tears that would fall uncontrollably down these already tear covered cheaks, Thranduil cannot die, neither can Legolas, i will not allow it,not i will not, and if they do die, well then Middle Earth will only have one Elven reakm with it's leaders still intact (lorien) because well the greenwood would fall to ruin, Imldaris would burn to the ground with it's excuse for the best healer in Middle Earth lord, and Arwen, sweet Arwen, will be left Fatherless, brotherless, and loveless, so yes please update, i am so thrilled that i can kill somebody and not be sent to jail for it, yay! party! lol keep writing

Hannon
Hugs
Racheal, Grace, Thranduils.Emel.A.Faer. (Thranduils.Heart.And.Soul.)

It's a very interesting story. I feel sorry for both Aragorn and Legolas. I'm also curious. What exactly happened during the time Aragorn was injured?

>=( jeez Elrond is being such a jerk! I felt so bad for Elrohir when he called him a traitor =( Elrohir not a traitor

NO! Don't die Legolas!

Anyway, I can't wait until you update again! I wanna know what happened with Aragorn and Legolas!

Keep up the good work!

This is so angst! I almost started crying while reading this. I have to say that Elrond is very stupid right now. Almost all the fics that I have read Elrond threads Legolas like his own son. But, ofcourse this is your fic and you do what you want! :) I like very much this story,it's something differend. In this webside there is very much stories who are all the same so this was something fun. I just hope that in the very End everything will be okay, but now it seems that nothing is going to be okay. Poor, poor Legolas! :( But well to the happier things; I liked this story and I hope that you update soon and there will happen something in next chapter! It was nice to be on your ride and now I thank you to it and say Good Bye and hopefully we will see soon!

_SormustenHerra

Hello!

A very nicely written story! I love how you wrote this - the tension is just killing me! Elrond may be a bit OOC, but if he wasn't, there wouldn't be as much of a plot, so I can see why you did that. I hope everything clears up soon, and I am anxious to read more!

-RiverOtter1

Do you know what makes me mad ? Well it is writers like you ! The ones that cannot finish a story before they start another one. I sometimes wonder why you bother writting at all? How can you put a wip story in to a competition ? WELL MY ADVICE IS GET YOUR ACT TOGETHER AND FINISH WHAT YOU START . MAYBE THAT IS NOT POSSIBLE SINCE YOU HAVE A SMALL PEA FOR A BRAIN ?