Awesome one shot! I'm going to find that other part of this story to read...hopefully you got it on here. Loved this oneshot!

Hi,

I recently read your Transformers fanfic "Outside, Looking in". In it you mentioned that you would write a sequel. It was a long time since you published the story and I was wondering if you still going to write it. or if I haft to give up the potential of a brilliant fanfiction... *sulks*

Please mail me at for any info about it.

Well regards

Lanfear

this story is pretty good but i was wondering when u were going to rite the inside wanting out story? ive been wating for it for a while but it still hasnt been written

Poor Sam! So where is the other part?

This is great, to bad it's just a one-shot. I'm looking forwards to reading "Inside,Wanting Out".

The whole concept of an AllsparkSam turned loneris definatly a new and intreuging(sp?) one.

I love this! This is an awesome take on the Allspark!Sam idea.

I can't wait to read the next part.

O.O UPDATE!

LOVED IT! FANTASTIC! i was going to put it on alerts but then i realized its COMPLETE! what are you thinking? this is great and i would love to see more, plz plz plz! write more chapters! also i can't wait to read the inside, wanting out backstory, plz write more, this is such an original story line, though i know that allspark!sam isn't i love how you have twisted the story to make it unique. so yea, PLZ WRITE MORE!

Oh my. This was a very nice little ficlet that left me hungry for more. Feed starving stalkerreader please? ^_^

This is a really good story, I can't wait for Inside, Wanting Out.

"Cliche idea"?

What are you, insane?

THIS ROCKED so many socks, I can't believe it!

I was horrified when I saw that it was 'complete' all by its lonesome!

Although I am about to scramble off and find the 'Inside, Wanting Out' backstory, I'm also RABID to know what happens next! The two little bots Sam created are ADORABLE!

And although the idea that Sam becomes or is affected by the AllSpark isn't brand new, this is, without a doubt, THE best interpretation of it.

The fact that Sam actually has the powers - heal, create, give life - is just wonderful to read, not to mention his potential to both fuel the war AND to help end it.

I'm not sure of the reasons in your fic for him hiding, pretending to be dead and being bitter about Mikaela taking his life (and his Bee :S ) but I could guess at a more than a few reasons he might choose to hide himself.

I LOVED IT TO BITS and I REALLY REALLY hope you do continue this idea some day. DESPERATELY so. :D

I just wated to take the time to write you a short review (though i´m unable to comment on language and writing style since nglsih i not my mother tongue- i can say that its not horrible but thats about it *g*)
as for the story in general, the idea of sam becoming the allsprk may be cliched and him being away maybe so, too. BUT you story will be unique in its own way and i´m looking forward to reading the next parts (btw they´re not published yet, right? or was i simply to stupid to find them on your lifejournal?) i like your bot brothers, they´re not the usual dewbot and xboxbot, at least i think so? and sam being on the 'lawless' side of humanity sounds promising too.
So, i hope i´ll get to read something from you soon
LG Silentia

P.s. i hope i didn´t make too many mistakes and that the review was comprehensible. i also hope that i didn´t manage to somehow insult you- not my intention!

A well-written AllSpark!Sam? Priceless! I love it!

Oh yeah i'm really waitng for your "Inside, Wanting Out" story! I love this storyline and well i generally like Sam!Allspark ideas :3

OMG I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT!! u did a really good job. plez continue.