Oh WOW!
I always thought there was more between them... Someone let it slip (in Eclipse perhaps?) that Edward gave a diamond to someone else too, but SM didn't elaborate this in Breaking Down... I always thought that Edward was engaged with Tanja too...
Really nice characterisation, I love, love, love your Edward! But... I don't think he actually loved Tanja more... I mean, then he wouldn't have chosen Bella... he could have come together with Tanja without any complications, so why bother for someone like Bella (a human...breakable... too much complikation..), if you don"t REALLY love her?
But these are only my thoughts... I loved this story and I'm going to read more from you!


A fav! :)

That was great! I love how well you wove Edward's thoughts and memories into the lines from the book. Bad Edward!

I liked the plot, but I really hate Tanya, and you know what, this story just adds to that hatred. Anyway, really good story :)

Loved it! Although I hate Edward&other stories or Bella&other stories, this was fantastic. Loved it!

I hate this story. Just kidding! I LOVED IT! Just loved it. Tanya was so convincing, and you got Edward perfectly. Awesome. In spite of the fact what I wince at such a possibility(because in my mind Edward and Bella should NEVER be paired with anyone else) I really liked this story. Way to go!

this one is brilliant too :) omg, i love your stories :) ...xx

We need more Tanya/Edward stories out there.
Awesome.

I cannot believe how much that hurt to read. Seriously I feel like someone took a knife to my heart. Why Edward? Why?

This is absolutely the best Edward/Tanya I've ever read. Seriously. The best ever. No doubt thE best. What I liked most about your story is that you didn't make Edward the hero. Please it's so over rated these days it makes me want to kneel over and projectile vomit. I love how you have those little flashbacks with Tanya in them. ((Are they flashbacks?! :o) This fanfiction was great! Happy Writing! =)

Wow.
I know that's not the case for real, but what a nice story! :D

Cool story. I would like to see more!

that was great although i really dislike tanya now!

I just found this after reading your other one, and I'm still amazed.

I love the way you've fitted this perfectly into canon, with the bits we recognise, and then Edward's added commentary. Your Edward is so perfectly written, and please, write more Edward/Tanya.

I love this! I've been looking for something like this everywhere. I too am fasincated by this pairing, but I have no ideas for them at all. I was wondering, have you ever considered writing the 30 kisses themes for them?

The REAL Alice Cullen ^_~

Wow! Scandalous! lol
Very good!
I loved it. You should continue writing this.