Simply beautiful. You are a goddess. This story is eloquent, sexy without being smutty, and again, deep in such a fantastically profound way. I actually envy you such phenomenal skill.
Love from
Lyny

So soft and cute. I like the ending, and their dialog.

You've done the world of Royai great goodness. I LOVED IT, CHICK! You said it started as a drabble, but it turned into a one-shot masterpiece. Great work. You always amaze me with your descriptions and word usage. I hope when we work together I won't embarrass you with my horrible skillz.

You're serious? This is your first Royai? I loved it! It was so in character and sweet! Amazing work, you have to make more stories :D.

Wow that was really beautiful. Amazing work, I hope that you write more Royai like this.

You said this was your first Royai story? Well you did a very good on it, I have to say. I really liked how the plot seems so simple yet you have turned it into something really beautiful. I had to love the ending too, about how equivalent exchange was best left to alchemists. That has to be my favorite in the whole story. Brilliant job on this, if you make more royai then I really will be looking forward to reading them.