Ooh, I love these. The last one is so sad, but good.
Very nice.

So the nuns thought Hermione was the bishop's daughter? Weren't they still evil for keeping her locked up? >:-\

thank you, thank you, thank you!! as sweet at the scenes with Bill were, this is what I have been waiting for! to read some details about Hermione's rescue is so sweet and utterly necessary. this way we come to understand where she is at in her relationship to Severus and ultimately to herself. I wondered what the nuns had been told as to who she was and why she had to be locked up, how her keepers could justify that to the convent. and now you give us an explanation.

keep writing!

one more thing: can you post all the M scenes of the story on one link of your live journal? I cannot find any of them at this point.

what a lovely addition to the original story. can you write a few more like that? anyone's point of view would be a welcome addition and insight!

Very nice chapters

I like them

Yayy! Wonderful chapters! Hope to see more soon!

SARAH

Oh my...*sob* That last drabble is heart wrenching.

Thank you so much for these missing scenes. They were crucial and the effects of not having them in the actual story was FELT. I'm so happy that you decided to write them and post them here.

Thank you Juno!

YAY! Thanks for writing what I requested! I loved it!

Very interesting chapter you have written. Thank you for sharing. Keep smiling.

oh! I definitely appreciate seeing Bill. He sounds like a great character in the books, and I wish we'd seen more of him. It'd be awful to teach at a boarding school--being away from your family for so long!

Another beautiful set. It makes me wish you could put it into the original!

Those were fabulous. I adore Bill, and you brought him to life.