 thesilverdove 2/7/08 . chapter 4 it was pretty good, and yeah, Al was Mitt's dad. How can someone so wonderful have a dad so horrible? It's a mystery for the writing, lightning bug! |
 svelte 1/16/07 . chapter 5Wow, you finished this almost five years ago... This was probably the first Dalemark quartet fic I've ever read, but I really enjoyed it. I look forward to reading more of your fics!
May your typing muscles forever prosper,
Svelte |
 Elenastar 2/7/04 . chapter 1Keep going! It's great so far! |
 ellimere 4/22/03 . chapter 5 yay! wats ur new fanfic going to be called? j/w keep up the good work!(p.s. this is just a stupid idea of mine that u dont hav to read if u dont want to: Maewen replaces Biffa, renaming herself Enblith and so she marries Mitt and the history books are still correct !(i dont kno how that wouls happen but it makes me happy so i dont care ! lol
ellimere |
 crystaleyes 8/16/02 . chapter 4Hmm... could have sworn i reviewed already...?it's a nice story and idea, but a bit too... straightforward and unemotional. Well, not unemotional, but... i dunno. |
 EvermoreElf 7/22/02 . chapter 3I like Kialin! And I think it was a very good Moril fic, especially when they said they were talking about Brid being stupid and they hate her, because humor is always a nice thing as long as it isn't overdone *glares at the fanfic writers who just invite a bunch of male anime characters to an interview or quiz show then talk about how gay they are* |
 EvermoreElf 7/22/02 . chapter 2that's really true, the whole not kissing someone thing. I think you expressed it really well. Short, crisp, clean, it explains itself. Some people babble too much in it, like me, trying to express something like that. Good job. |
 EvermoreElf 7/22/02 . chapter 1Simple and blunt, but it satisfies. |
 miss toad 5/2/02 . chapter 5Oh! I had read it yesterday, but had not enough time to review. Though you deserve it! Excellent fic, I love how you protrayed the characters and worked with their various conflicts. THANKS FOR YOUR REVIEW! You rock! Later! |
 Raven 4/21/02 . chapter 5 You fic was really nice! i love it I hope you come through with your plans of writing a new one! God bless in everything you do or write! |
 Autumn Brown 4/3/02 . chapter 4 Nooooooo! Come Back ! please don't stop writing, I just finished the Dalemark quartet today and now I am obsessed. If you don't keep writing I think I'll die. I wasso sad when Mitt and Maewen were seperated. I cried. God, I'm a dork. Power to the Hopeless Romantics! |
 The Wandering Blue Andalite 3/25/02 . chapter 5I wish you luck on your new series and much good luck to you! As they would say, Luck ship and shore to you. You did a wonderfully fantastic job with the story and I can't wait to read more. |
 The Wandering Blue Andalite 3/13/02 . chapter 4I like view #2 very much _ I'm all for Maewen and Mitt,but in the earlier books, Hildy and Mitt did have a promising realtionship. I liked how you decribe Mitt in Hildy's second view of him. its true,you can't help want to protect the boy,even if he can take care of himself. Its nice how you gave Hildy a lot of thought on how she used to act,and how sorry she was about it too. She doesn't seem as bad as a person I used to think she was,when she hurt Mitt. Please do continue this story,cause its really good and I like it very much. The ending was partly sad and happy. To answer your question,Al was Mitt's father. |
 Kumi-Barra 3/13/02 . chapter 4 That was very good. Write more. I need more. |
 AriaStar 3/11/02 . chapter 2Wow ... first of all, let me say thank you for your lovely review of "Promise", as well as your email. _ Secondly, I love reading takes on the whole Mitt/Maewen thing in Maewen's time, and this is a nice theory. I'd like to add that I *love* your chapter starting with the moment when Maewen touches the statue and disapears; I've never read a Dalemark fic dealing with Mitt and the other's back in Mitt's time. Again, really really good. |