This was a very very good One Shot. I really love the whole Sesshomaru and Rin dynamic, though im still unsure of whether i like them as a father/daughter item or the "going to become lovers one day but, inevitably, Rin will be stripped away" I am still not sure since Sesshy will outlive Rin anyways...but i love that you bring that whole dilemma to life in this. Great job!

Aw, that was just touching. I can imagine this scene taking place in the series! Very in-character. I can't bear to imagine how Sesshoumaru would be on Rin's death bed. >_< Ack. Anyway, I liked this fic a lot~ Thanks for writing it.

Aw. Poor little Kit.

You kept Sesshomaru in character really well.

Nice story.

This is so beautiful! So sad, but so beautiful! I've added it to my favorites.

Aww, so sweet. Awesome job!
-WdH