 Cantar 2008-12-15 . chapter 3Pleas tell me that you have finished writting chapter 4 and your posting it soon...come on! You totally left us with a cliff hanger! |
 Pip4 2008-12-10 . chapter 3This is an interesting story. Looking forward to how it turns out. I don't suppose you've ever thought of having Raw help Glitch out, what with being able to find hidden memories and all. Whateevr you do, looking forward to it. |
 WeBe 2008-07-13 . chapter 3Good story so far. I like the slow development of his cognitive abilites. Just don't take it TOO slow! lol. You are either quite familiar with the functions of a brain from a medical aspect or have done a lot of research.
Just one thing: Do they have computers in the OZ to have the term "Re-boot?" Be careful of using phrases that would not be used in the OZ. |
 Sparta 2008-07-03 . chapter 3I'm intrested to see where your going with this, please keep going |
 Cold-Creature 2008-07-02 . chapter 3I can't believe you've only got one review! XD This is a lovely story. I can't wait to see more interaction between Glitch and Cain... very sweet.
I want Glitch to escape the hospital room now... :D To explore everything... Love it!!
Keep it up!
Cheers,
CC |
 CheshireDreaming 2008-06-29 . chapter 2Wow. Oh my God, that's so awesome. Not that Glitch is being mentally tortured, mind you, but the realism and the drama and the... Well, just WOW.
More please! |