AH I LOVE IT!! I cried when I read the part about how Darry looked when Soda walked in. It was heart-breaking, yet beautiful! :))

aw, that was so sad! I'm crying now! But it was really well done!

very well done, funny how i haven't read something like this before

Hey! this was a totally awesome story! It's nice to read about somebody taking care of Darry. I really like this idea. :)