Continue plz! It was killing me!

Oh wow, that was pretty dark. Kairi is a tricky one. And Riku is just a co-conspirator. A very good one-shot I say

CONTINUE!!

honestly, this is flipping amazing!

nice detail and wonderful vision.

sadistic and luring.

i love it!
i can be a beta reader is necessary if youre ever unsure about a certain part. :)

please hurry and update!

- midnight

I've been dying to find a desturbing portral of this three-way. This is the first one I have found. Wow. I like it. I can't pick out what I like, but it's original. A nice view of them disturbed.

lolz reminds me of the hide and seek games me and my friends played, and the same exact thing happened to me! I was in the closet (at night) when one came in and I pulled her in and we hid lol

Well, I'd just like to be your first reviewer. Yay!

I am usually kind of dark too. I just don't show it. Man, you should read some of the poems that I've written. Nevermind...

Anywho, great story.

~KdMac