haha!
funny!
love it! =)

Sweet, yet incredibly promising of something more. At least to those with a bit of a perverted thought.

Too bad it's a bit on the short side but nonetheless something very very good.

Oh, what delicious fun! Lovely!

was the "triumphant smirk" in referance to a potential 3-some?

loved it thank you

Great story!

Very interesting chapter you have written. Thank you for sharing. Keep smiling.

Cute story. I'm assuming the smirk was because he found something she liked?

hm should i be a little nervous about that smirk? will u be writing a sequal to this?

oh. Good setup, please continue it!

It's interesting. I'm confused with their relationship and how Hermione feels about Lucius though. Maybe some more detail would be good...