This was REALLY good! The M-rating is misleading, LOL. Anyways, I loved the song and it really molded well into the story. Thank you for the good read. ^^
Keep writing!

This is so sad.

I really love the way you describe things here, as well as the 'tone' of the story. And though I got somewhat irritated with Ryoma for doing that to Sakuno, I love the ending. Oyea, I love this kind of ending.

BTW, I nearly cried in the part where Ryoma left a note, saying "Thank you.. [for last night.]" Oh. Stupid Ryoma.

Nice work, Seru-chan! ^__^

GO Sanako(Sp) BO! Ryoma

this is too sad. poor sakuno.

..nyc..!..


..this wouldnt happen..!!..






...aw...

what he became a play boy?
how dare he...!

nice story!
although i hate sad endings, this one really touched my heart
(yeah, of course. coz' i can relate.) :'(

anyway, nice work!
hope there's a sequel where sakuno and ryoma will be together! :)

that was kind a sad(for sakuno that is) but all in all i like teh way you describe every situation.. so 8 out 10 for me(just because i didn't like teh ending.. im kind of bitter when it comes to sad endings.. gomen ne.. )

sniff... that was so bittersweet but I loved it. As usual your writing style rocks =P Ganbatte!

Nice, can i ask for a sequal?

It's too sad to know that Ryoma just left...another unrequited love story again but I gotta say it was nice...your story was nice, I mean. wahehehe...keep it up! ^_^x

O.O

T^T When Ryoma kept on saying 'I'm sorry' I just lost it and cried!! :'( Well.. Not really.. Just got teary eyed. Then afterwards, I was fine! Until the last bit!! You make me cry too much in your fics. ¬.¬
Lol, jokes.

But yes, I did love this fic!
It was like, a PERFECT story! I'm not sure if there were any mistakes, I didn't see any, but I was into the plot a lot so.. yeah. Thought I'd be honest wth you! ^^

Anyway, another great story! Well done!! :D

Oh my gosh. What a piece of art.

You truly are one versatile writer!

This fic was so good, that I teary-eyed on the last part.

Oh my gosh.

PERFECT.

Nice try! It's a good story, though I feel a bit pity for Sakuno. After years of waiting, what she has finally got is the fact that she & Ryoma'll go their separate ways(*sigh*)
Maybe, It's life. Things (including feelings) keep changing all the time.
Good luck in your exams & tests! Ganbatte ne!
Looking forward to the update of your another story "The Gigolo" soon ^^

t-t-THAT WAS SAD! mou! *heart was breaking when i was reading the last parts* but i LOVES it Seru-chan~! it was awesome! i really liked it..and for some reason..the last part was bitter...yet encouraging :3...i liked Sakuno's last sentence..it was great!

LOVELY WORK SERU-CHAN!