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WESTMAN AND L
2009-08-25 . chapter 8
First Off, This is really good. I really like it. Though I think that Jessie and James were a bit to harsh, I would have thought them of joining up with misty instead of being the bad guys, though actually having them as the bad guys is quite original, I guess. Anyway I have some ideas of what you could do in the story. I Have this Idea of Ash Forming a Squad and recruiting people who don't want to lose their Pokemon into a team who would fight the police. I especially like the Idea of the legendary's getting involved, like have Mewtwo and Mew Team up, Lugia fighting with Tracy, Celabi protecting the pokemon in forests, ect. Hm, Is this ban going to spread to other countrys and leagues? Anyway I really like this fic. Keep up the good work! :)
scarlettHuntress
2009-07-27 . chapter 8
I have to admit, I'm a little scared of pokemon fics. I expect most of them are drivel written by ten years olds, but I'm glad I read this fic when I was linked on the pokemon comm at lj.

You're created a world where pokemon and pokemon battles are plausable, and are running it though a really interesting situation.

I'm really intruiged by this fic, to say the least.
Kyon-Is-Haruhi's-Slave00
2009-06-17 . chapter 8
awesome story so far. and i like the name of the police force *snickers* any way can't wait for the next chapter
Soulless Warlock
2009-06-02 . chapter 8
What is Giovanni up too? I have a feeling he has something to do with this new law but I can't place my finger on it.

All and All, really intense story. Then again, you rarely ever disappoint me.
jamesf1980
2009-04-16 . chapter 8
I KNEW IT! GIOVANNI IS THE BASTARD WHO DUPED THE KANTO GOVERMENT INTO PASSING THAT ** UNHOLY SILPH ACT LIKE I SURMISED.IF THIS WERE MY STORY I WOULD MADE THIS A NARUTO X-OVER,AND SENT EVERY NINJA SQUAD OF THE VILLAGE HIDDEN IN THE LEAVES TO FIX THIS ** OF A MESS. TRUST ME ON THIS BECAUSE I SPEAK THE TRUTH.UPDATE POST-HASTE. TTFN
NamioftheSea
2009-03-30 . chapter 8
O_O...GREAT JOB!I, simply put, LOVE this story!! Please update soon!
buneary709
2009-03-26 . chapter 1
Awesome. I love the idea so far and can't wait to see it updated again.
Shimmerleaf
2009-03-09 . chapter 8
Oh poor Psyduck =( This is an awesome story but so soo sad.
SushiChica
2009-03-07 . chapter 8
...Psyduck abuse. Sad Sushi is sad.

Still, another amazing chapter. Loved the Dragon Rage idea; truly inspired work there, Cid. Have I ever told you that I'm incredibly glad that you're writing this fic? Keeps my love for Pokemon alive. =]

Excellent work, as usual. Can't wait for another chapter.

-Sushi
Nueij
2009-03-01 . chapter 8
AH!
I appararantly didn't put this on my story alerts so I didn't know it was being updated -.-''
AWESOME CHAPTERS! I can't wait for the next chapter...kk
Hmm, I'm getting ahead of myself, but is it possible Giovanni organized a psychic Pokemon team to brainwash people to establish the law? kk I'm getting ahead of myself again...
ANYWAY, UPDATE SOON PLEASE!
pokeshipper409
2009-02-28 . chapter 8
i really like this x]please continue, this story is nothing short of incredible :D
susiipie
2009-02-28 . chapter 8
Haha Jessie and James never change. It's great seeing the other three together again. Anticipating the next chapter! Update soon!
pikagurl23
2009-02-28 . chapter 8
I'm so glad you decided to update this story! I loved this chapter and can't wait to see what becomes of the group and the pokemon. Please update soon and good luck!
BlackBlur87
2009-02-27 . chapter 8
You have the characters down very well. I wonder what Giovanni has in store for Psyduck...

"Follow the Blur!"
BrazeRancor
2009-02-27 . chapter 8
Great! Awesome chapter! Just one thing. Do you subscribe to the teory that Giovanni is Ash's dad? If so, he'd make a great port of call as a last resort.
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