Aww, that was sorta bitter sweet, but cute. I can so see that happening though! With Kendrix coming after him and them just talking outside... :D The two of them bonding just didn't happen much in the show. I'm glad you wrote it, it feels almost like the piece they forgot. Nicely done!

From what I've seen of LG, I'd say you did a good job with the characters.

I liked seeing Damon and Kendrix's relationship grow and then what happened when she died. You did a good job with a serene feeling with a bit of fun and humor at the right moments. Also you had that hint of sadness at the end.

Great job, I really liked it.

That was very, very sweet, and very in character, which is quite a plus in my opinion. It's been a while since I saw a Lost Galaxy fic that was this well written and enjoyable to read.

Very well done indeed.