Excellent glimpse into Ed...do I sense a little 1st version FMA reference in the Envy comparisons? :P Great stuff, but you need to write and post more :P

Oh ed! * glomps him* this was soo sad but love the ending!

Hey Cassie this is a good one...a bit too dark and sad for my tastes though *smiles innocently* add me...I'm eventually going to get around to writing a story but in the mean time I'm just going to collect some of the good ones to my favorites...*smirks* I've already got 26 including yours...lol

Jen

wow That was a bit scary. good story