what i liked about this one shot is it had emotion to it. You did an excellent job!

I haven't read all of your Rhen/Lars fics (this is the third...and I haven't finished the Love Potion...XD) but this is the one I like best! Rhen's fears and reasons for secluding herself from the world just came to life in here, became believable for me. And Lars...Lars is just dang adorable when he loses that snarky attitude of his XD I just wish the story was longer...XD

Anyway, keep writing!! Love to Rhen X Lars!!

I heart it!

I really liked it! :)

And I thought I was totally alone in the whole Rhen/Lars shipping thing. xD.

Oh wow! That was a great Rhen/Lars fic! It was so sweet! This place needs more Rhen/Lars (Do you mind writing more please?? ^^)

I really liked the open ending, so I don't think more to that is necessary; but that's just MY opinion. This is your story. ^^ We can make up our own ending this way... :)

Yosh! That was great! Fave'd Thaks for writing that!

Keep up the good work!