Very nice!

Thanks for sharing.

I was so excited to get a new story from you. I really hope this is just the first in a long line of new stories. I LOVE YOUR WRITING! God bless you.

Lovely little story. Very well written, moving and incredibly amusing in places too. Chick flick? LOL! Well done! :)

Shep without whump or h/c is kinda like Blue Bell Homemade Vanilla Ice Cream--pretty dang good. We can't have sundaes all the time now, can we? :P

Thank goodness that John was only stunned. He does not need any more time in the Infirmary!

Lovely! Just right all 'round--well-told and well worth telling! Thanks! ^^

Excellent character piece on both John and Teyla. Very enjoyable read and a nice bit of insight into Teyla. Thanks for sharing.

loved this, the characterization was amazing.

I enjoyed your story and thought it was excellently written. Great job! I really liked how you showed that Teyla finally realized she could be Lantean as well as Anthosian. I also thought it was cool that she didn't leave John, even if it meant losing out on infromation on her people. Thanks for sharing your story.