This. Was. Wonderful. I'd say I was speachless, but in truth I have too many things to say and typing just doesn't quite cover it. Not just the ending, either, though that was as beautiful as the rest. But just the... healing, the ideas, EVERYTHING. Beautiful.

Did you think up Sunstorm yourself? If so, wonderful creativity. The fusion converter, what it would do to him, everything. I need to check out your profile.

Well done, well done. I must say that one doesn't see many fics with Sunstorm, and I sure didn't expect a fic with this type of pairing to pop up. Not that I didn't like the pairing, I found it cute. In fact I enjoyed it like I enjoy most of your fics. The writing was smooth, easy to follow, and intriguing.

Thanks for the read. Oh, and you really should put his under Sun's character bar. lol. His character doesn't have anything under it yet; he needs some love. XP

I love this :)

Oh, how the mighty have fallen.

that was cute. poor sunstorm, I'm glad things turned out good for him.

Adequate? Are you kidding? That story was friggin awesome! I just loved it, especially the characterizations and... everything else that I would list here, only my brain can't think of any more words.

And I liked the new "reimagined" Sunstorm. Rather than some random raving lunatic spouting he's the prophet of Primus, he's calm; he can still be recognized as Sunstorm, but rather than a raging sun trying to burn itself and everything else, he's more like a star--distant but not quite cold, still curious of all over which it presides--or like the calm before the storm.

/rant

What a cute pairing! I've barely seen any Sunstorm fics, but I really love Starscream ones.

Very interesting... and very cute. I like the way you portrayed Sunstorms character. Here I was thinking that Ratchet would become a complete hypocrite and simply bond with Sunstorm because he liked him hahah. The way you forced them to bond is very very amusing. I absolutely adore your writings. Great work. :D

Absolutely amazing. when i read it, i was inspired to start mine, and now i'm writing chapter 5. nice, and amazing auther, i can't wait to see if there's a sequal!

that was a great story. i hope u get the next chapter up. keep up the good work.

Wow, this is an amazing peice about Sunstorm, a Seeker I haven't seen much written on before. Very interesting bits of Ratchet (totally in character!) and his quest to help a very unstable individual...with unintended consequences =)You could have quite a lot of fun with this pairing if you ran with it!!

Awesome story! The story and characterization was very well written. :D

Oh... yes! Very good! I like the little oneshots you post.

Lovely, very nice characterization of Sunstorm (and Ratchet for that matter). The plot device you used to rid him of his radiation was a convincing touch as well. They make a good couple :)

This is actually one of the very best Transformer's fic I have ever read. You really set a standard that is hard for other people to match. The characters are wonderfully imagined and brought to life, and the story progressed extremely well to its conclusion. I'd praise you some more, but I'm off to check your profile for more stories...