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silver drip
2009-08-07 . chapter 4
Another chapter please another chapter! Your story is sickingly awesome. I'm sad to admit it. Please update as soon as you can and I can guarantee that for each chapter you write I shall review!
silver drip
2009-08-07 . chapter 3
Great chapter and I love the ending.
DarkRavie
2009-08-04 . chapter 4
Kyouya is so mean! I hope he will realize what he's doing and come to care for Haruhi. I hope Haruhi doesn't become suicidal. I wonder, if something were to happen to her, like an accident or something, how would Kyouya feel? I look forward to reading your next chapter.
Paradoxismminant
2009-07-31 . chapter 4
Not too bad for a second lemon.

A little...I dunno, rushed and not particularly detailed, but it fits with the overall feel of the story.
Paradoxismminant
2009-07-31 . chapter 3
Wow. Harassment to the max, much? (heh heh).

Kyoya can be really scary sometimes...-_-
Paradoxismminant
2009-07-31 . chapter 2
Ah.

Pseudo-rape. NOW I know what you meant...{sweatdrop}
Paradoxismminant
2009-07-31 . chapter 1
Sadistic Kyoya, much?

Interesting in the whole transvestite department and stuff^^.
Tot
2009-07-11 . chapter 3
OMG Please update! This is really good :)
Amy
2009-07-06 . chapter 4
Lovely writing! Not very often do I find a fanfic with the darker side of things expressed violently AND sexualy, usually people make it depressingly sad, instead of angry. I really like this fanfic ^_^ I believe it is worth more than confetti, haha.

P.S. Nice touch, having Kyoya keep the bedsheets!
kyoneko87
2009-06-18 . chapter 4
Please continue the story!
rookie
2009-05-03 . chapter 1
another good story!! I can feel the angst bit coming!! :D
pakinin
2009-05-01 . chapter 4
AYA! wee made this happen? i find that both pleasing yet scary... the critics realy do make the world go round hunh? move over kyoya... and, no, i dnt thnk its gross...disturbing maybe, since this is a side of our bad boy i've never seen, but good. it's realistic to say the least, and due to that n many other reasons, its got my wellwishes.
kuddos!
pakinin
2009-05-01 . chapter 3
how can kyoya not be egomaiacal?
and yet how can we not love him?
these are the questions that haunt me...
n,... i adore u fr this story... it's very good luv. then again, u alreadt knew that...the more iread, the more i love... nuff said. kuddos!
pakinin
2009-05-01 . chapter 2
love it.

luv, ur releasing a lot of pent up emotions you know that? then again, being a LP fan meself, thats probably a good thing...
pakinin
2009-05-01 . chapter 1
kyoya, angsty much?
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