I love these stories! There really good and I love your writing!

Awesome i LOved it but this first chap leaves me a little confused when you get to the next chap but otherwise it is really good lol soo please write more soon!

-ZaN

this is such a great story! i love the plot! it's very original! keep writing!

That was really sweet!

aw love it more more shane and mitchie love update soon!

lol that was sweet and really hillarious!

"Shane would never understand women."

"So, when he found himself in the middle of Lake Rock with a crying girl on the other side of the canoe, he wasn't sure if he should comfort her or get her back to the shore as quickly as possible.

After all, all he had said is that he would miss her!

How could that cause a girl to cry?"

I loved those parts! this is really funny :)

ud soon :)

Rachel :)

aw, cute

new, original chapter - i like it

awe! the cuteness!

very fuffy chapter! totally loved it!

please update SOON!

IAMSOAP

sweet. i liked it

That is adorable.

I love it.

Wow. That was awesome! Update soon!

so i have to say this is one of my favorite stories.

you make it adorable, but not too fluffy.

also, you have awesome grammar, which is really rare in this section. great job!

-caitlin:]

How Cute! Keep Going!:)

Aw! How sweet!

I think the witty banter helps them be more in character, so great job with that! _ I LOVED the ending of this chapter! It was SO sweet! It reminds me of Harry from Harry Potter; never been good with crying girls, unfortunately for him! U

This was REALLY good! I am very impressed! U Keep up the awesome job! Told you I'd check it out...! U *U*

Ever-so sincerely signed,

Shizuku Tsukishima749 :D ;D :) ;)