interesting short...too bad is so short...i think you could have dragged it a bit more...i like that you killed Edward and by doing so bringing he characters of Bella and Jacob together in a suicidal pact...she kills him and waits to be killed...is like if rewriting Romeo and Juliet...but instead Paris and Juliet commit suicide pact after romeo gets killed by Mercuccio...interesting

WELL I'M DEPRESSED, TOO. -pout-
Thanks a lot >:C

But seriously - EXCELLENT story. I always love fanfictions that concentrate on Bella after her transformation, and this one is especially good. I've wondered a few times what Bella would ever do if Edward was killed, and I think that you story is certainly one of the most likely options. Very sad, but at the same time, very undeniable. Also very, very good.

I think that it is, by far, the best Twilight story I have ever read, though I share your depression at the end..

yes! edward died thats awesome! Jacob died too, thats sad but at least he did it for bella(i'm so Team Jacob)does bella die too does she?!! please write another chapter. Please!

That was extremely good and sad! Even though Jacob is arrogant sometimes and even a jerk, I have always had a soft spot for him.

kool story but..werewolves aren't immortal. They start aging after a period of no phasing, like when they get more control of themselves and actually control when they change. Also, vampires can't cry.

oh my gosh, this was sad but so beautiful!! i loved it!

:,( so sad...

wow, this was a really good piece of fiction :D

im depressed now too. very good, but im depressed.

that was amazing. i loved it even though i'm a little depressed now but i guess in a good way cus i love your story now

wow, what a lot of action for one chapter! it was interesting, i must say, but...wow.
i cant believe jake died! i am so awfully depressed! even though i am an *edwardxbella* type of person...
good writing, though.
keep it up!
xox