Oh...dear...LORD...

I...don't know what to say. I honestly don't. I mean...

YIKES! :O

Well, I'm glad you updated, now I know a lot more about Haji and Nerfrachtan. Very interesting characters, that's for sure.

You know what's not fair? You don't have more people reviewing this story. Maybe you should put it up on DA.

Oh-oh-oh. DUMB, James. You NEVER have sex in a situation that has any inkling of HORROR or WAR involved! It's like ASKING for an axe to the head, and...voila!

And that Executioner IS an asshole. But an effective asshole, I give him that.

Well, so much for Jack. And now Michael's in charge. He'll be a better president, that's for sure. Hmm...I'm still not completely sure what to make of all this fighting...

Aw, the ending to the chapter was cute. Yet somehow, vaguely creepy. So I liked it very much. (Thumbs up)

I...don't know what to say. I'm torn between sorrow and sympathy and fury and anger. I mean, no offense, but Dr. Leafgreen's kind of an a-hole.

Wild, much! Did you just do two updates in one day? Crikey! You've certainly got a lot to get out.

The boob size thing made me giggle. I'm still laughing, actually.

And WOW, Terminoedar is a PRICK. I hope somebody kicks him in the balls or something. I don't usually advocate killing people, so a harsh kick in the balls seems very merciful compared to this sort of guy who engages in "Kick the Dog" moments.

I didn't think the story could get more intense, but Jumba's sudden murder from out of the blue...WOAH. Definitely gripping. A good update, indeed.

The upcoming clash shall be catastrophic, I imagine.

Heh-heh, that IS cheesy...but good!

They always underestimate the kids. Always. "Adults are useless", as the saying goes.

It was good to see Ewa Lani again! She's as beautiful and witty as ever. :)

Ho boy.

Does the corruption know no end? Now there's going to be grand war on all sides. YIKES...

Can't wait to see how this works out though. :)

War?! Well THAT'S not good. At least Dr. Leafgreen knows the true story, and if one good person who has the proper skills knows the truth, then the usual way it works is he can help others learn the truth very easily.

But of course, that's only AFTER a great deal of pain and strife. Can't wait to see more!

Sincerely...

Nick

An awesome chapter, lots of suspense and action seen here, this story overall shows a lot of promise.

Glad to see another update AND Dr. Leafgreen appearing, along with Painkiller as well. "Can I go kill that dictator"? XD

Like a kid at Christmas! But sheesh, poor William. I would not want to be him. He's got to do something about the guy who keeps diving into his mind and screwing around, taking advantage of his condition which HE probably caused.

Can't wait to see more!

Sincerely...

Nick

Okay, perhaps THAT'S a parent's worst nightmare: their kid falls in love with "some girl he met at a party" and knocks her up! Hoo boy. The love between the two seems rushed but that's what makes it funny. :)

Poor Will...he keeps being tortured by his visions. He doesn't deserve such torture, he only got strong-armed into the assasination for being in the wrong place at the wrong time.