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| dontforget2remember 2008-07-02 ch 1,  | abuseAww... Excited to see where your taking this |
| PnayBabyGurl 2008-07-01 ch 1, | abuseI loved how you wrote this. Short and simple but sweet. Nice use of synonyms too! It really showed the differences between their boyfriends and relationships. Awesome job! Keep writing! -Mina |
| ColorsOfTheSky101 2008-06-30 ch 1, | abuseAw, this was really good. :) I loved it. |
| bsloths 2008-06-30 ch 1, | abuseAw, very cute. I liked how you compared the three relationships- that was really clever. |
| secrets710 2008-06-30 ch 1, | abusegreat oneshot. |
| gypsyeyes91 2008-06-30 ch 1, | abuseI realyl like that you went through and adressed the flaws in everyone's relationships, and pointing out how that might bode for each of them. Everyone was in character, and you did a great job with mechanics (ie grammar, spelling) in general. I really enjoyed the introspective piece on the very popular relationships of the Zoey 101 girls. |
| Lady Liln 2008-06-29 ch 1, | abuseI like how you have the pattern...it reminds me of another of your fics I just read, which I'll review next! ;) It's great how it moves from "hope", "think", "know". You can tell the strength of each relationship...and also the description of each boy! Great little drabbles. |
| Violet-Shadow 2008-06-29 ch 1, | abuseI love the pattern you set up for this piece. It flowed so nicely. Great job! |