interesting. i like it!

Interesting thoughts and great writting. I like the questioning mindset and the way you also added the story of Icarus into it.

Good work, and I hope you continue writting in whatever story settings you deem to write.

I enjoyed that very much. It was lyrical, and it captured nicely the struggle between Tykki (the evil, sadistic Noah) and Tykki (the friendly, brotherly human). Rhode was brilliantly portrayed, and even the short appearances of Allen and the Count were in-character. Sometimes the dashes, parenthesis, and commas made the sentences difficult to follow, but overall this fic was well done. Good job. :D

aww this was a good one. truly a fic full of character.