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Reviews for: Broken Doll
CoquetteDoll
2009-06-18 . chapter 1
Amazing! I love SasoSaku and this is my favourite kind of story, the dark type. It just seems a lot more realistic than Sasori actually falling in love with her.

Even less likely is her falling for him. (Maybe Stockholm Syndrome?)

In either case, great job!
Yakuko
2008-09-26 . chapter 1
I love this. The world needs more SasoSaku.
mewantpancake
2008-08-21 . chapter 1
so sad and very sadistic... but sweet in a twisted way...
Sadistic Kunoichi-13
2008-08-06 . chapter 1
. . . I LIKE IT! 8D You are very good at writing dark fics, even if you don't do so often. I can actually see Sasori doing this.
HolyRoseIzumi
2008-07-20 . chapter 1
Great story and all but i dont see how it's sasosaku except in the end where Sasori mentions Sakura's name. It seems more like just a story about Sasori making a puppet from a human.
Hiei's Cute Girl
2008-07-01 . chapter 1
Awesome! You and Hikari Adams-senpai work together so amazingly! I grovel at your feet! XD

Loved it, and it makes me wonder if Sasori will ever use her as a battle tool, preferably against Sasuke or Naruto. It would be most amusing for him, I bet, to watch the frozen, tortured looks on the face of his poor puppet and his enemy. It's a rather splendid idea, but I don't think it would be right for me to ask this of you. If you wrote it, it would certanly be better than anything I could ever hope to type, but I doubt you'd be willing to do this for me.

Loved it to bits and pieces!
Miss Anonymiss
2008-06-30 . chapter 1
Thank you.
overlordofnobodies
2008-06-30 . chapter 1
Oh man that was great. I dont now why but I all was like win Sakura get trun into a puppet. I hope you came out with that other one soon.
JazzyCat
2008-06-29 . chapter 1
WOW this IS dark.

I LOVE IT. Write more. Do, like, a sequel, or something. This is too good to leave like this.
SparksAndFires
2008-06-29 . chapter 1
This is really good...in a wierd creepy messed up way. But I mean that as a good thing. It seems how Sasori would really act he doesn't acually show any emotion.

Anyways, sorry if my review makes no sense. But what I'm trying to say is that this is really really good.
Toccota
2008-06-29 . chapter 1
Sweet, that was cool! I think you could actully continue with that, its possible. Well, One-shot or not, it was a good story. XD
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