A beautiful tale...I loved it.

:D

Wonderful, as always! This is seriously one of the best TsunadexJiraiya oneshot I've read! :D

you broke my heart..T_T

Soo sad but also very good! *sniffles*

Oh this is just lovely--and painful.

DARN YOU JIRAIYA! *SOB*

I love the ending. That single line after all the emotion and flashbacks is very poignant and a superb counterpoint. You also did a wonderful job handling the grief, something I don't see very often.

Damned sad. Damned satisfying.

THAT WAS SO SAD!! SHE WAS NEVER ALONE IF JIRAIYA WAS THERE!! SO VERY SAD I LOVED IT! PLEASE WRITE MORE!