Don't be ridiculous, sweetheart. You do a very decent job at trying English; I've seen much harder to read English. Anyway, you do a wonderfully decent job.

Also, although your characters are slightly out of character, they are mostly believable in the context of this story. Its a wonderful story so far and, again, back to the tale!

Still continuing with the story. =) I have just a few curt comments before I go: 1.) You should read you storied over for grammar mistakes, because there are quite a few, and 2.) why the specific title?

I do think the respect thing was a wonderful idea and I did like your dual perspective beginning. However, I felt like Alexiel's character was a bit OC at the beginning, but there are allowances for that as this is an AU. Lucifer you got well through his sinful behaviors.

However, the comment on the bottom of this chapter may need slight fixing. I'll let you have the crazy Rosiel, because it makes sense and is the mentality we see most with him. On the other hand, lack of empathy does not necessarily make one a serial killer. In a narcissist's case, lack of empathy would mean that they couldn't understand why a person would be upset when they're the one who has the "right" to be; think like Lucifer's case with the clock. That would be lack of empathy.

Good story so far and, now, to continue it.

i've always been a fan of this fic - best alexiel/lucifer one out there. ;)
question though - who was jizabel calling a **? alexiel?
if you could just answer that in the next chapter, i'd be very grateful. ^^
can't wait for more.
but please tell me it's not ending soon!
i really want to read loads more.
take care.

Hey, sorry it took so long to review.

You're as lovely as always, although I should mention that Alex wasn't a virgin. First she gets raped by Lucifer and then I think she goes all the way with Kira/Lucifer...

Yeah, in manga, people get raped with their clothes on. ^^'

it was a little weird to see Alexiel as a virgin (i mean, she had that life as a courtesan in the manga), but i guess your explanation is good enough. I loved the dog :)

Sorry it's been so long since my last review. WAH! I love you!
LMFAO! My nee-san and I were just talking about something like this scene in the chapter tonight..we can poke such fun at Lucifer.XD
Lucifer has a big black dog.. hmm, nothing surprising there.. could always imagine him with a wolf-like dog or something, but calling him Abbadon, now that was a good one.
I laughed so much while reading this whole chapter, I was having a really bad day and this cheered me up excessively, thank you!

I like Lucifer's voice here too, but at first I was confused, because there was no detonation that this was his voice.

But, I should add that although the image of Mike Tyson in a dress made me laugh and cover my eyes in horror, I'm not sure why Sarah would be considered ugly. Just... young. It's more like it wouldn't be legal for him to molest her... or whatever he does to secretaries.

I don't like Sarah much though... although, now I draw the connection to Sandalaphon in a dress.

(I forgot to add for Chap 9, UPDATE SOON~)

I love you as always... and now you're making me think of writing fanfic again... XD

Lawls at Belial's love for tea, but it's just like her. Although, does this mean that she falls for Luficer, who hates her, and then decides that she's impure and rushes off to find him 9 virgin brides? (well, if you gave someone enough LSD it might work.)

but that also means... KURAI! (Love that kid.) Please?

Plus, I'm kind of jealous now, to know that English is your second language... you write really well. My cousin would have had less issues with the entire SAT/Toufl tests if she understood english with your fluency.

And finally, this chapter made me swoon. And I'll leave it at that, otherwise you'll find yourself an essay.

Wow. That was a good one, perfect for the "V-day" Thank you for not making me wait for too long :) Sorry if I've sounded like a lunatic... (and now again, that devastating need for more is threatening to consume me, but I'll resist!)
Poor Rosiel. Just when His Radiance starts acting like a decent human being, and he's being pushed away (literally). Oh, well, it's not like he has no place to go :D

Heyya, have I told you how much I love you (and this story)? I love your voice in how you narrate and how their entire relationship isn't the usual overly cliched happy go lucky kind (think Setsuna and Sara) of story. Plus you're literate.

Anyway, update soon, because I might die due to the cliffhanger.

And happy early Valentines Day.

It's cruel to say you'll finish this and leave an open ending for so long... Who was it that caught them? Hey, I writhe in agony here...

man oh man, lovely one. this: “Why were you crying?“ "Because your mother didn’t abort you.” was priceless! and the psychological abuse. and the dream. and.. well, i think that's my fav chapter. although i think there were some errors (the party is tomorrow.. after two hours)- i guess that means "today", no?
anyway, congrats:)

why have you deleted this fic? i don't quite get it. anyway, the stor is entertaining and it's sad to see it incomplete (and not updated in a few months)...

“Yeah, he just got beaten by a blond shrimp with magical kung fu abilities. He’ll be fine.”
that was totally brilliant!
anyways, poor Barbello, a ** star?! Sheesh...