can you please update this fic I really want to know what happens next, it is really different then most harry potter cross overs and I really enjoy the originality of it

I just finished reading it and was really wanting to know what was happing next please update

I felt a little weird when Seto called his little bro. "Mokie". Well it might be the nickname that he would said when they were alone, I think. Anyway Mokie sounds like some chabby monster card to me. (Kuribo or something). LOL.

Scary. scary. This chapter's really scary. I could feel that they're in some demon's lair. Something dark surrounded that orphanage for sure. Uhh scary.

Anyway I hope that Seto would meet his enemy(?) soon. I don't quite sure what Riddle want exactly, but know that Seto would fight back at some point in some way.

I still wait for the next chapter. OK?

Goodness. Normally, I don't read paragraphs. I skim. But you and your writing, there were so many hidden gems nestled in the paragraphs, great descriptions and insights I read the whole thing. So yeah, definitely look forward to the next chapter.

I just finished reading your fic today. I love it. I don't quite sure how old is Seto now, but I know he's mature than other kids his age.

I wanna know what era he's been, when Tom was still an orphan or he's already become the Dark Lord. (Well I hope he's Voldemort and take the brothers for some reason. Mwahaha.

Maybe it's Tom Riddle who just graduated and meet Seto. Sque!! I told you, I love your fic.

I wanna know. I wanna know. So please update the next and the next chapter.

It seems to have an interesting plot but... it was full of metaphor, symbolism and similes... TOO many of them. You made it really 'over-dramatic', that much that some parts seemed meaningless, and overall truly hard to read. I could hardly find 2 simple common sentences in a row!
If you could lighten it a little, it'd become much better :D

Wow. I mean - just wow. Your descriptions are amazing, they're powerful and even though they're lengthy my interest was never lost. I'll be waiting for the next update!

Interesting, but the lengthy description seems to get fairly repetitive.

A wonderful read full of the descriptive elegance I've come to expect from you E.C.! I was delighted to find this one '...her overwhelming layers of stark, black clothing that smelled strongly of old silk and the inside of armoires'. I have never come across anyone other than my local antiques auctioneer who uses the word 'armoire' in private conversation. Full marks and some genuine beeswax polish for that gal! I loved this little observation. 'I guess that’s why they like the little ones. They have no past, only the future. And they can control the future, if they want to…' How true. We move swiftly from being shallow floating icecubes to veritable icebergs of hidden history!

Pleased to see you've set literary foot on England's shores. This was marvelous... 'he was always acutely aware of the rain. Pounding was not the right word, the rain was screaming, running closer towards him with every moment, chasing him down the road and howling his name.' Hve you lived here? I'm holding a bbq in the garden on Saturday evening and I have a feeling that your forecast is going to prove horribly accurate. I do hope they like damp chicken?

I love this too. 'The sky slowly melted into the ground, forming of a new breed of shadowy creatures that leered on the distant hillsides' Yes, that would be me then. Much to like...

plz continue i like it alot so far