that was a cute story! did u rite more?

bad very bad. she is turning into a bad girl. hehehe

nice story...good work!

just got finished reading ur story and i want u to know that it is the first short story that i actually enjoyed...it was amazing gud job...i cant wait to read more of ur work...i'm going to start reading ski somthing right now...lol!

bahahahaha omg how gay as if you would do that haha thats the worst attempt at flirting iv ever read lol sorry.

this was a good story

aw to cute!

I like! Let see where this is going!

FLIRTACIOUS...er...however you spell that word lmao

that was good

Aw

This is the only story i have ever reviwed and onlly one word can sum it up "Brilliant"

Its wrong, all wrong, serena would never act that way, not from the beginning, she needed to do it shyly, theres no way that would happen straight away! its all wrong, seriously wrong!

I think that story was sexy and hot .You should definetly do more a genius.

great story!

luv it

luv y'all, lol