i think the writing style is nice, and its detailed enough to let me picture whats happening..

Interesting fighting going on--pulling from a video game?
My only complaint is the slow movement in the the H/G relationship :).

I like it.

Cool and please write more thanks as I am enjoying the story.

Well, Harry's interaction with Ginny is rather sparse, but his retelling of the action is quite fun. A demon to fight demons, and a challenge of heredity.

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das war Überraschend gut.

Mit freundlichen Grüßen (mfg)
dein überraschter Iron

PS: read with help from: h t t p : / / t r a n s l a t e. g o o g l e. c o m
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So, what? A dream where he fought the lizard-demons? And having Ginny cuddle with his left arm means he can now change it to look human?
Somewhat confused here. . .

hes to much like dante

Interesting premise, what is this a crossover with? Harry gains more power and so does his weapons with each kill; that will help when he faces moldy.

Interesting chapter

I like it.

Interesting stuff. Keep at it!

thanks for the update

I would love to see what you write next. Your a great writer and your stories are great too.



Thank you,



Terri

great fanfic update soon