Beautiful. A couple of errors here and there, but passionate and powerful. I love how they're each helpless in his own way, both victim to a weakness that doesn't affect the other one physically.

And, of course, Sora being his stupid optimistic self in spite of everything, as usual. Brilliant dynamic. These two need more fic about them, and not the romantic kind--that's another thing I really like, that it didn't cross that line.

I liked the end. =] A little hard to follow in the beginning, though. But overall it was vert good story!!